Rain Poem by sekharan pookkat

Rain

Rating: 5.0


Under the crying clouds
I hold my hands
Around your waist
And whispered.....

Smell of sand inhaled
Pressing waist invited
To share your love
Kept untouched....

Lips changed into purple
Eyes brightened as stars
And remember the words
which I forgot to say...!

Eyes brightens again
Under the crying clouds
Holding your hands
In this journey of life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautifully crafted on love and rain. Thanks for sharing.10

0 0 Reply
Captain Herbert Poetry 10 August 2015

A very cool and romantic lines and words. Well done

0 0 Reply
Beach Girl 12 July 2014

What a beautiful poem! I loved the descriptive 'crying clouds' and 'eyes brightened as stars'.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success