Ragwort Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

Ragwort

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This bleak barren wasteland with ruinous rubble
Where buildings and shelters are slowly reclaimed,
By ragwort that clings to the crack and the crevice
On concrete carpets abandoned and framed,
By old rusting fences and gates that are padlocked
A perilous prison of damp and decay,
But soon it shall yield to the forces of nature
As slowly these remnants now crumble away.

As flowers do spread and then cross over borders
And sprinkle with gold with such freedom of will,
Where once was alive with the sound of the foundry
The steel and the furnace but now it lies still,
For there undisturbed all the weeds shall develop
And mask the harsh lines as the seeds are then cast,
On winds that will blow through this old blackened brickwork
And there they shall thrive with industrial past.

The years will go by but the ragwort shall linger
And grow ever-denser with bush and with tree,
When walls will all tumble then drowned by the thickets
No more shall remain of this shell I now see,
So shine on sweet flowers and cover this wreckage
Let this be a place then in which we can share,
For I long to witness the land in its glory
And hear the hushed songbirds again singing there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 17 November 2008

For I long to witness the land in its glory And hear the hushed songbirds again singing there. ................................................................................. Yes, Andrew, for such minute the god will give force what to go through this... 10..... Best wishes, Tsira

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Ernestine Northover 09 November 2008

I'm lost for words Andrew. What a wonderfully woven piece of writing, and such glorious imagery to bring it all to life. Stunning reading. Great. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 09 November 2008

Though we try to shape and change the forces of nature to suit our urges for change In the end life shall spring forth Love duncan X

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Ann Beard 07 November 2008

You have truely captured nature and her diligent workers accepting back the soil on which man builds then discards. I find your poem very touching and beautifully written. Ann

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