Rachel - Way Too Young Poem by Jessica Dawn

Rachel - Way Too Young

Rating: 5.0


My heart is heavy
i cannot sleep
I can't close my eyes
without hearing you scream
I can't even think
without seeing that scene.

How could this happen
you were way to young
I cant help but think
it was some how my fault
If it had to be...
why couldn't it be me?

You were so stubborn
you always got your way
i'm glad you kidnapped me
so i could share your last day
How could this happen
you were way too young

I'm trying to be strong
for it is what you would have wanted
when I open my eyes
the pain some what fades
I try to hide it
Bury it deep & pretend its all lies

It is not fair, you were way too young
whenever we fought, you always won
I put all my trust in you
you were always right
I just wish that night
I could have won the fight

I pray everyday
while I am on this earth
that i was there with you
sheltered from the storm
where we can feel safe
Free from all harm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelley L Baxter-stanley 21 February 2008

Well Jess...all I can say is I am praying for things to get better for you and I am so sorry for your loss of such a special friend like Rachel.Time will heal things some what and it should one day hurt a little less but you will Always remember her and hold her in your heart. I am so thankful though...that you are still with us because I don't really know what we have done without you....U mean more to me then you could possibly know. Although this poem makes me cry becauue of all your going through...I thank you for sharing your thoughts on here. Love U Sweetie..... (hUGE HuG) A. SHelley

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Coach Roth 18 February 2008

Tremendous emotion...keep writing. Coach

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