Quit Poem by jon crowell

Quit

Rating: 5.0


quit trying to die because you have no one
i try becouse i never was alive
quit playing games with my heart and mind
i wont because i love torture
quit trying to lie to me
i never lie i hate
quit with suicide
never thats my life
quit i will never talk
go a head i will lead you with a flock
quit treating me like a dog
never you had it comming and now you will learn to obey my evrey word

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MANDY Loves life 09 June 2009

its really good and really creative and i like it alot! ! !

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cool... i too like how it seems to be two people in the poem.. very creative....

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Dakotas Angel 14 May 2009

I liked it how you answered back as if their were two people in this, good work

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