Faint Poem by jon crowell

Faint

Rating: 5.0


when i look back at all thie time i wasted being with u i hasted
when i look back u didnt really love me
when i look back i knew u wernt there and the darkness sets in
here within i feel the faint light seep away the cuts are so deep and the sheep falls asleep but the limitness of the faint heart gets piece back 2 gather just 2 get torn apart the house of the faint sounds grow slowly away from me im free i live my life by a quarter a mile a day as the life faints slowly i draw my last breath to only see u look away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Reamey 17 December 2009

This is very good, I really like it I can really relate to your line..... 'when i look back u didnt really love me ' great job! 10+++

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