(q) 2 (Song) Your Footprints Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(q) 2 (Song) Your Footprints

Rating: 5.0


Oh Baby, Where did you disappear
Your footprints etched everywhere

In every nook and cranny
Deep in my mind
Also on the heart
Getting entwined
Tried to wipe them
Got a thick broom
Millions of them in
Such a small room

Oh Baby, Where did you disappear
Your footprints etched everywhere

Then I thought of
Whitewashing the walls
Wipe away everything
And then not recall
Remove all traces so
Heart cannot seize
Every single drop
In a cold freeze

Oh Baby, Where did you disappear
Your footprints etched everywhere

The waters are muddy
I cannot even see
FIlled with weeds
Algae and debris
Have lost my senses
And all my sleep
Just surprise me
With a sudden peep

Oh Baby, Where did you disappear
Your footprints etched everywhere

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 25 May 2007

A songstress would vocalize in the resinating harmony of this mejestic number

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I like this a lot...a bit of a twist away from your usual tempo/tone, but most enjoyable, indeed..You continue to impress with your quasi-styled skills! FjR

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