Purest Form Of Love Poem by Seema Jayaraman

Purest Form Of Love

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©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai,19Sep2015

White doves in the sky
Endless, formless white of light
Apron that encircles

Present in form and thought
Womb offered later Arms to embrace
Mother, chaperone for life
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Saturday, September 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my early attempt at Haiku, still a novice learning the technicalities and the intricacies of haiku.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2016

Endless, formless white of light... white doves. the womb..... a wonderful combination of thoughts and words. dear seema.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2015

Deeply envisioned and aptly depicted. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Seema Jayaraman 19 September 2015

Thank you Sir this is an early attempt at Haiku though it's technicalities are still confusing

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