Pure Thinking Poem by Rajendra Ghorpade

Pure Thinking

Rating: 5.0


Clean and pure thinking in mind,
Then enemies become your friends,
Sorrow also give sweet fruits,
Fire also gives cool waves,
fill only one tone in whole,
Shri Sadguru Mouni Maharaj says,
you understand with experience by sadguru's bless.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gillian.E. Shaw 08 June 2005

Really enjoyed the poem! However, may I suggest you end with the word 'experience' because the repetition (Sadguru's) of a word can be a negative move concerning poetry. Beautiful; a demonstration of clarity.

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