Punishment Poem by valentin savin

Punishment



PUNISHMENT 
As a punishment for my sins 
God told me to write love poetry.
And herewith my tale begins… 
How to write, God didn't tell me.

You may believe me or not,  
But I strive, poor soul, since then. 
With tense brow furrowed sit as idiot - 
Learn to write from starry men. 

I've written some poems full of love. 
Mostly in the form of a madrigal. 
I need the push and the shove 
Full of respite and lull.

My love poems are in demand - 
The writing issue is resolved. 
The ladies sing them with the band 
And I have got the problem solved.

I'd like a book published for my honey. 
But the problem is the Lack of money.
03.05.2006 
February 2019 

Sunday, March 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: humor
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fantasy, humor, for my bad behavior God banished me from Paradise and told me to write poetry. But he didn't say how to write it. Since then I am suffering, but write poems and want to publish a book
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valentin Savin 23 March 2019

I am the Satan, The Fiend whom you somehow know and named so. That's all to it, I believe. I have more than enough publishers here and they all ask for money to print a book. Is it not so there with your agent? I have one book published here and I don't want to spend money. PH is more than enough. or no, you are my starry man.

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Bri Edwards 22 March 2019

in my first comment P H deleted h e l l from " what the h e l l" . put the letters together and what does it spell? ? ? bri :)

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Bri Edwards 22 March 2019

i never heard of anyone, except Satan and his band of merry demons, being expelled from Heaven. what the (pardon the expression) did you DO, for God's sake? ? ? ok, it was probably NOT for His sake you did 'it'. send your address and i'll forward my publishing agent's name. bri :)

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