Problematic Depth Poem by Pranab K Chakraborty

Problematic Depth

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In every relation
two birds reside
on the same branch

one tries to sing
melodious song
most the time
whereas other
its coarse tune
with irritating monotony
tries to win the battle
with the other

relation imbalance
sometimes compromise
sometimes put some patches
with unnecessary gifts
but the faint melody
of singing bird
tries always to keep
a harmony!

Pranab k c
13/09/2014

Saturday, September 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 September 2014

The spirit of compromise is very essential for any relationship willing to survive any problematic depth. I love the way you conveyed the massage. Lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

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