'Pretty When You Cry' Poem by Killa Cam

'Pretty When You Cry'

Rating: 5.0


Pretty when your eye is dripping or it's dry
it's just you but I know that life is rough but your even
more pretty when you cry

Your pretty to the unknown
but it's almost to perfect not to be shown
invisible to the eye but naked to the mind
your already riddle already known your life like a story
I can go on and on but if it's one thing they haven't notice it
it's that your even pretty when you cry

I would show so much affection only to make
that eye drip it wouldn't be because of thoughts of depression
but happiness, fill with love and dedication that it makes you cry
I wanna show the world how special it is that your eyes of beauty
are even pretty when you cry

God must forgive me for
this cause through the shadows and dark flames
in my eye I only see that you r gonna even
Be Pretty When You Die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Allen Vinal 31 August 2005

Good premise. Use allusion rather than direct description. This poem could be great!

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Killa Cam

Killa Cam

Harlem, New York
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