Predetermination Poem by Captain Cur

Predetermination

Rating: 5.0


Fate is mere conjecture
as decisions have a voice
inside rings that wrestle
with the complexities of choice.

Fate is but a theory
as is evolution of our kind,
predetermination wearies
of the laziness of mind.

Environmental habitats
confine us to a block,
just as wind tossed ships
are savaged in a dock.

Once those sails are hoisted
and the rope ties heaved away,
the changing winds may blow them
but the rudder guides the way.

Wednesday, August 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: decisions,fate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

It is really a lovely poem on decision and fate having touching expression and nice collocation. Thanks for sharing.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2018

A great poem with a great theme. Decision and fate have been explained intelligently and vividly portrayed. Loved reading it.10++++

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