Positive Poem by Baharak Barzin

Positive

Rating: 5.0


light up the darkness
Think of the taste of eternity
join the reality
Think of the joy of peace
kill the darker side of power
Think of the art of love
kill the animosity
Think of the happiness
live and let live
Think of the river flow
let the love flows our veins
We can reach the eternal love
so let love loves our love

Sunday, July 8, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 26 April 2017

The title POSITIVE describers the idealism and confidence of the speaker. She has a very special kind of faith, that good intentions multiplied by many people can turn the world into a better place as individuals see the light and follow it. The comparison to a river is apt because water over time wears down the resistance of soil and rock. The immense Grand Canyon in the southwest USA was carved by water erosion. And you identify a moral force in true lovers which equals that natural force. You encourage people to think five times - you are trying to galvanize people to believe in love's power and then to implement it.It may take centuries to implement so we better begin in 2017. We have a long struggle ahead of us.

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Siddartha Montik 01 December 2016

we al need and live for Love.. beautifully expressed! ! thank you.10+++

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Unwritten Soul 21 January 2013

Think well so stay greater...a positive will place you in great peace of mind_Soul

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