Pool Of Blood....My Blod Poem by Scarlet .....

Pool Of Blood....My Blod

Rating: 4.8


I woke up
not know where I was
not knowing what happened
not knowing what I missed
not knowing how long I was gone
for I woke with water pounding at my face
with a turned of my head
it all came back
for I saw it
I saw I was laying in a pool of blood
my blood
my life
what have I done
how can I fix this
I try to think
but my body is still in shout down mode
I lay here under the water
I lay here awake
in a sleeping body
I lay here drowning
drowning in my watered down blood
drowning in my life
my body is slowly going numb
I try to move
I try to wake my body up
but nothing happens
all I can do is wait
wait for when my body decides to wake
for until the all I can do is lay here and shake
shake and wait
but the question is will my body be too late
for will I have already drown
for will I already be gone
gone
lost forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Becky Ginn 28 April 2007

This poem really made me think because the same thing happened to me when I was younger and you have worded it so beautifuly. It's a 10 from me. Herefor you whenever Love Becky

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Wandering Scarlet 28 April 2007

im still here, dont worry

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Madly In Love 24 April 2007

We are still here for u

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Dee Daffodil 24 April 2007

Fortunately you are still with us! Hugs, Dee

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