Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 203 Points (India)

Poetry


Adam looked at the lonely moon.
throughout the night he mused
he was all alone of his kind

unlike those lovely birds
unlike every other animals
who wandered in pairs around

till it was dark all around him.

He wished there be someone
also with him of his kind
as beautiful and tender for him.

Tears rolled down his cheeks.
Adam soulfully prayed for Eve.







© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.

Submitted: Thursday, January 22, 2009
Edited: Saturday, June 07, 2014

Topic of this poem: poetry


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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (11/8/2009 4:48:00 PM)

    A poetry moment of pure grace as only you
    could pen it. Beautiful, Palas. I am so glad
    I did not miss this one.

    Always your friend,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Her Name Is Taylor (3/10/2009 5:13:00 PM)

    really pretty, i enjoyed this write, the spacing puts much emphasis on your strong lines, well done! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pablo Cruise (3/10/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    Very lovely lonely serenade. Nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sicelo Sithole (3/4/2009 1:52:00 AM)

    A beautiful piece of poetry. Very original and mind refreshing. thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (1/29/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    Lovely piece of reading... A joy to view your work 10


    Best of Health & Happiness

    Jon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ana Zaldivar (1/27/2009 10:18:00 PM)

    This is extremely beautiful and real... It's a pleasure to read your poetry too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (1/27/2009 5:17:00 AM)

    wow Adam and Eve
    in the Garden of Eden
    dont tell me he only prayed--
    nice poem kept me thinking
    ++10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie premji premji (1/27/2009 12:34:00 AM)

    beautiful lines palas.....enjoyed.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Rhodes (1/26/2009 6:12:00 PM)

    Palas, very well done. Very alive and real. By the way, you commented on one of my poems. Questioned my age. No, the age is incorrect. Don't like ages being displayed. Feel it detracts from essence of written thought. I'm rebelling. Thaks for your encouraging words. My best, Carol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (1/26/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    lovely write Palas...enjoyed the read very much...thank you...Fi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stephanie Saba (1/25/2009 4:13:00 PM)

    absolutely lovely! !
    great work!
    10! : D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (1/23/2009 12:09:00 AM)

    a creative spin-off on the process of evolving...nicely woven! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (1/22/2009 7:33:00 AM)

    ..........Poetry is born out of pain and longing.....

    nice visualization, unique

    mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (1/22/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    a beautiful piece about creation
    the first man and woman... this shows love...
    eve was taken from the ribs of Adam....near his heart to be loved, not from his feet to be stepped upon...
    ...if Adam and Eve haven't committed sin, there there will be no US, no people around...
    great share....10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,306 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (1/22/2009 2:33:00 AM)

    A most inventive & intriguing spin on the Bible's kick-off story of God's Creation of Man & Woman...And a most apropos title...as indeed, this is a fine display of what poetics be.

    F j R
    2009 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 312 Points Indira Renganathan (1/22/2009 2:04:00 AM)

    Nice poetry on humanrace evolving...interesting 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 836 Points Sadiqullah Khan (1/22/2009 2:01:00 AM)

    A plain story. Had he not been created we would have been in peace. Good write Palas. (Report) Reply

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