Poet Recondite Comments

the rhythm is similar to a brisk march past...a very apt technique employed to suit the theme...

your choice of anapestic meter suits the theme. it has an energetic movement and has strong rhymes- conveys your message in style. one has to read it aloud for proper impact. very well done Mamta

Sathya you excel in all the genres of poetry- love, nature, social and philosophical. you are a poet with very high social consciousness. yes, I do agree with Varanasi ji, that poetry gets written on its own, dependind on the moment that inspires us. however, living in the society a writer cannot isolate himself from the world he lives in. though provoking and inspiring. you are experimenting in duifferent forms. I am learning a lot reading yopur poems thanks Mamta

Poetry is not written. It writes itself. So suggestions to poets may not be of much use. Every one has one's own heart and conscience. Let us leave it to the discretion and discern of the individual poet. Sermons may not work here.

'Populace that is grinding in grief' proves an exemplary turn of phrasing, Sathya! Overall, I enjoyed this one and it's imagery immensely. Keep asking your pen these pertinent questions; I know I'll be grateful! Warm regards, John.

I like the thoughts in the this..the idea is brilliant I will learn from this style...and i will learn more from your works and this piece in anapestic meter is really nice to read.... with all honesty, I don't really have knowledge about styles... I don't study poetry but I know I will learn a lot from your works...on different styles thanks for sharing, Sir I like this...stated here about poet brilliancy...but a must..our pen to write with purpose.. write with focus on fruitful works(Like this piece) ...to be shared to everyone.. for the world to get something from it... a letter wealth..a wonderful inheritance for the young ones to follow...and leave a memory through our works...Fruitful poetry... thanks again for sharing with us your brilliant works and your brilliancy of course... 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia