Poetheart Morgan

Rookie - 348 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Please Me ~make Me Dream~ - Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Slowly, Go ahead and cry
they are tears from ~water dreams~

that disband and disperse
while you sleep
i can hear it, from my side of
out of your dreams

they will come to a end
your soul you will feel light
Because tears never hurt
Tears wash!

you know how is this
last nigh was my turn
but mine ~ soaked my soul~
with sobs
~being more and more revealing~

I cant lie anymore!

chuva

if each time i remember him
you deeply dive on me
pretending to swim

in a place that is for you to cry....

So, Please me and
make me dream again


Comments about Please Me ~make Me Dream~ by Poetheart Morgan

  • Gold Star - 17,695 Points Ramesh Rai (8/7/2013 12:02:00 PM)

    beautiful dream sweet dream delighted deam like your write (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 17,695 Points Ramesh Rai (8/7/2013 12:01:00 PM)

    beautiful dream sweet dream delighted deam like your write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 360 Points David Wood (8/3/2013 5:52:00 AM)

    Very well expressed poem full of emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/29/2013 3:21:00 PM)

    You go girl, he owes you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (7/29/2013 2:55:00 PM)

    written with a lot of pain. very well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,794 Points Sekharan Pookkat (7/26/2013 8:00:00 PM)

    Pause between the sobs really draws out with missing words and give us pain (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,794 Points Sekharan Pookkat (7/26/2013 8:00:00 PM)

    Pause between the sobs really draws out with missing words and give us pain (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/25/2013 4:06:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem of pain.
    Of who? Perhaps a past love that has beparted.
    The pain is real. Chuva... a word for something missing and in this poem
    there is a great deal missing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/25/2013 4:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem of pain.
    Of who? Perhaps a past love that has beparted.
    The pain is real. Chuva... a word for something missing and in this poem
    there is a great deal missing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,695 Points Ramesh Rai (7/24/2013 11:46:00 PM)

    tear never hurt tear wash, beautiful.. I have posted a poem on the same line ASHQ. you may please request my loving sister Shahzia Batool to get it translated. thnx for sharing
    best wishes and regards. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,205 Points Sallam Yassin (7/24/2013 7:01:00 PM)

    SEND me back give me breath
    give me vintage from your pain and dream
    Cocktail to give heart peace
    your piece is pleasing me with peace.. please me - make me dream i-so sweet/thanks and be blessed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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