Playfulness Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

Playfulness

Rating: 5.0


Playfulness

Early morning
the rain has fallen in the night
inhale freshness
"morning has fallen"
makes me think of a fat man
who fall because
he has not tied his shoes properly.
I can´t remember the song
but I think feel it is beautiful
My soul is sentimental
I avoid churches
the organ music makes me weepy
I don´t know why the bloody
organ sounds awful on its own.
Sorry.
I was writing a Haiku but got lost
in the jungle of words

I am not a poet
verse writing is for the daft
with nothing to do.

Look people that was a haiku.

Saturday, September 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Quoth Theraven 12 September 2020

'Look people that was a haiku.' and a fine write to bring to the brink. QtR

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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

I am not a poet verse writing is for the daft with nothing to do. Look people that was a haiku.- - - - - OOPS, " poet" is 2 syllables and breaks the haiku rule! ! but since this poem is playful I'll play along- - -enjoyed your flow of thought jumping from this to that- - 10

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