Pictures Poem by Rini Shibu

Pictures

Rating: 5.0


People come and go in our life
They are the pictures
Sketched in our mind
Either remembered or forgotten
Some are like pictures
on the wet sand
Washed out by the waves
Some on the white board
intentionally rubbed by the duster
Some are like screen saver on the desktop
one is replaced by another
And the pictures sketched in the heart
are hard to be erased

Friday, October 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: forgotten,life,memory,people,remembrance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 13 October 2017

Such a well-written poem, Rini...a highest 10+++++

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Paresh Chakra 15 October 2017

A lovely poem on non-erasable memories. Thanks for he sharing. 10 for it.

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Paresh Chakra 15 October 2017

And the pictures sketched in the heart are hard to be erased Beautiful sketch of memories that sustain. A poem so nicely written. 10 marks.

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Rini Shibu 15 October 2017

Thanks Parrish for your comment Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2017

Muse! ! Life and death. People come and go. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 15 October 2017

Thanks Edward.. Glad you liked it

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Valsa George 15 October 2017

Beautiful and factual observations! Enjoyed reading it! Yes, each face we meet leaves a picture in the mind either vivid or blurred. Some are soon to be erased or to be framed to stay for ever! Some get dim in course of time. Unfortunately some do not fall in the lens of mind's camera!

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Rini Shibu 15 October 2017

Thanks for the review.. Rini

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Akhtar Jawad 15 October 2017

the pictures sketched in the heart are hard to be erased A lovely poem, pictures made on a heart though turned dim but often come in dreams.

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Rini Shibu 15 October 2017

Lovely comment Akhtar..

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