Ph: Love: Under Your Blue Sea Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Love: Under Your Blue Sea

Rating: 4.8


Blue-grey eyes always so striking,
Like ocean spray on pounding days,
A cooling vision beguiles me,
Rip tides draw me into your ways.

Sand clouds swirl against your shoreline, ,
But clear up the deeper I go,
Shadow figures flee before me,
Vague promises I've yet to know.

Oh! My reflection's in beauty's eyes,
Could being there not be a dream?
Welcoming arms that embrace me,
All this without even a scheme?

Like the sea your love engulfs me,
Reveals treasures no man has seen,
Fantasy rocked without measure,
What on earth could all of this mean?

Lunar tides count days of passion,
Mystic rhythms come into play,
The gift of menstrual cycles,
'Love children' who wait for their day.

Let me breathe beneath your waters,
Live and die under your blue sea,
The delight of sons and daughters,
Share with God what He meant to be!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston
April 8,2014

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Full of feeling and loaded with life. Freely flowing and beautifully blowing like breeze. Well done my friend!

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Tanya Gupta 11 April 2014

i loved reading it...it is wonderfull...keep writing. please come and read my poems, it have been a long time to get you reveiw.. hope you'll come.thanks!

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Gajanan Mishra 09 April 2014

let me live and die under you, wonderful and true love - 10

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

Let me breathe beneath your waters, Live and die under your blue sea, The delight of sons and daughters, Share with God what He meant to be! .......................most beautiful lines in the poem....flows swiftly like ocean, yet bores that scent and hue of an ocean/..............

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