Ph: Haiku: Haiku Perfection Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Haiku: Haiku Perfection

Rating: 5.0


a picture-less frame
spring’s new growth proudly displayed
artist malpractice

Sunday, November 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston
November 29,2015
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abekah Emmanuel 30 November 2015

Although I have no strong taste for haikus, because I see them to be fragmented thoughts whose meanings are difficult to decode, I think BJ is doing a great job of reviving the spirit of haikus. I have always been impressed by the effort an American puts in writing haikus. This is beautiful! Keep it up!

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M Asim Nehal 29 November 2015

Very well thought Senryu....Wonderful deception.

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