Persistent Rains.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Persistent Rains....

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Persistent Rains….

Rainy Stories,
but also rain stories:

days long
dreary drizzles

droplets drops on my face

but one thing
I still remember
crystal clear

when I asked the Lord in my daily prayer
not to send the rain
had to be at the hairdresser's

dear Lord please keep today dry

that day it was a thursday
and it remained dry
another greatest blessing
came my way!

the sunbeams smiled at me

heart warming greetings through
roses, shrubs and trees

today I enjoy the butterflies and the bees

despite the constant drips

these loveliest friendly garden-visitors
such marvelous tiny flyers
so colourful and beautiful

thank you dear Lord
for these great blessings
such wonderful creatures
despite the rain
they remain
in my domain....


© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Thursday 9 July 2020

Thursday, July 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: god,poem,blessings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
despite the constant drips

these loveliest friendly garden-visitors
remain
in my domain....

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Thursday 9 July 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2020

Droplets of rain drizzles in our realm and but in reality rainy days brig rain to bring new crops and greenery. Butterflies sing and fresh morning prays. We recite God's poems. God's garden is wealthy. Friendly visitors realize this truth. Both rain stories and rainy stories are wonderful. Basing upon your deep perception you have excellently penned this poem...10

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