Perception Poem by Eddie chavez

Perception

Rating: 5.0


A vague memory of another reality
a constant reminder of mortality

too pure for me, impossible to clearly see.....

maybe from another life
from somewhere truly free of strife

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 June 2010

Hmm very wise poem…’ a constant reminder of mortality’…this life you’ll be free of strife… Thanks Poet Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Is the title a perception...or conceptualization? n

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Sana Rose 14 June 2010

I think you have an explanation ahead. My mind is not so complex, I realized... What makes u write so grown up thoughts...Lil bro? u are gonna make a poetryquake...

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