People At Port Trakl Part Two Poem by Daniel Brick

People At Port Trakl Part Two



One of Us

The aging Englishman
lived alone, and
even a steady flow
of whores could not dent
his 'essential solitude, '
as he put it,
bragging into his gin and tonic.

He lived in a furnished room
in the luxurious Hyperion Hotel,
perched on a cliff overlooking
the ocean and the port. Were they
not the Antipodes of his life?
Once he had captained ships,
now he could not master his daily life.

Often he would be absent
for days and nights, presumably
indulging in a fierce binge
in his lonely furnished room.
When he resurfaced finally
at one of our Port Trakl
dives, he looked as if

he had stared at Death, face
to face, never having flinched
even once. Soon his appearance
improved, his wit returned,
he was funny, a delight to be
with, a shallow drinker,
with some of the sea captain restored.

But no friendship ensued. He could
not be trusted. His wit turned
venomous, his speech, although
perfect Spanish, became boorish.
We looked away, we walked away,
tense days followed, a week or more,
before we relocated our rapport.

So we were surprised, stunned
really, when an English woman
arrived alone at Port Trakl
a month after his death,
claiming to be his widow.
Her papers were all in proper order.
She left in two days with the body.

Only then, after we had lost him
a second time, only then, in subsequent
months, when life settled stolidly
into routines and habits, only then,
when empty chairs and boredom
reminded us of the light he had shed
did we grasp, He was One of Us.


Portraits of Two Young Poets

I
The young poet combs his hair
gently but firmly. He will not
tolerate even a single hair
out of place. His only suit,
a tropical off-white affair,
is frayed, worn through, and
impeccably pressed. He faces
the world with pride every day,
whether it is a crowd, or
a single friend. When you engage
him in conversation, he fixes
his gaze on you, and you can
feel the ancient rhythms
of verse coursing through his being.

II
The young poet combs her hair
gently but firmly. The dark brown
tresses fall gracefully past
her shoulders. She trusts they will
behave themselves. Meanwhile, she
writes poems for herself alone,
sometimes even addressed to herself.
She is too shy to share them, but she
carries them everywhere. She longs
to be recognized by a kindred spirit,
or a soul mate. Gardening displays
her tenderness, her care for living
things. Because of her nurturing,
flowers bloom in Port Trakl's only garden.

III
They met through music: it was
an affair of the mind. They became
familiar through poetry: it was
an affair of the heart. Neither the boy
or the girl believed in luck, or even
good fortune. They were early resigned
to a life of suffering. But that first
night they always recalled as magical,
when she stepped in for his drunken teacher,
playing piano to his violin playing,
and the hearing of three hundred citizens
was blessed by Beethoven's Spring Sonata.
Later that week they exchanged poems,
and each embraced the soul of the other.

Monday, September 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: music,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 05 October 2015

The fact is Daniel sir, certain poems or works of art in general are so enchanting, that one cannot help but wrap themselves around them.. I find your poems like that, ones you have to imagine yourself inside them, think hard and let the meaning seep in, and that is the beauty of a great piece of art, it sucks you in even if you try not to... P: S: Goosebumps, always, a lot of goosebumps reading your poems. A great pleasure as well as privilege :)

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Daniel Brick 05 October 2015

Yes, Souren, that is what makes poetry so special it pulls us in even if we don't fully understand what is being said. And that's natural. I don't understand Life itself but I love it. Poetry reflects life in that we can live with a poem and let the meaning gradually seep into our minds. You have a poetic mind!

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Souren Mondal 29 September 2015

Just like the first one, I had to read this poem almost half a dozen times in a row to even get a little grasp of what this means. And again I could understand very little.. But the two parts of your poem seemed so well-balanced.. While in the first part the loss of a friend signalled a void that was always there but never noticed, and went on unnoticed after the death of one of the friends. In the second poem, two enthusiastic, nervous poets, willing to find the 'poetic soul' perhaps, if I may call it so, end up meeting each other, only to resign to a 'life of suffering'.. Now I might be wrong but it just goes on to show that in Port Trakl no one can escape the ultimate blows of Fate, the predestined paths of painful suffering is preserved smoothly for these citizens.. There maybe a small sojourn, so to say, into an illusion, with drinks or love, but ultimately the birds in the sky, the omnipresence of death, melancholy, and a meaningless existence is inescapable.. And although, I had said in my comment in the first poem that Port Trakl is a place that every one wants to vistit and yet never want to visit, I almost feel certain now about one thing - we are in Port Trakl, whether we want it or not.. The modern life with it's indulgence into hedonism and with an unquenchable greed in everyone's belly, we have already turned into citizens of Port Trakl. Although, fortunately or unfortunately, very few of us are actually capable of understanding it....

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Daniel Brick 30 September 2015

You wrote NOW I MIGHT BE WRONG. No, you are entirely right. You wrapped your mind around my poem and wrote a wonderful critique which sheds light on it for me too. This is why writing comments on each other's poems is such a wonderful activity for both reader and poet.

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Kelly Kurt 28 September 2015

Some very competent writing. I would read a book written by you, Daniel. Your use of language is unparalleled and your imagination seems boundless.

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Daniel Brick 30 September 2015

I love the word BOUNDLESS. I recently wrote an essay that begins THERE IS A BOUNDLESSNESS IN POETRY WHICH THOSE OF US WHO LOVE IT GRASP. So your use of it to describe my imagina- tion was a peak experience. I appreciate it very much and strive to be worthy of it!

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