People At Port Trakl Part One Poem by Daniel Brick

People At Port Trakl Part One



The Ministry of Fr. Sirocco

'The helpless come here for
rumored miracles. Once they occurred
on Sundays and Holy Days reliably.
Then the world gave itself over
to godlessness and depression,
and miracles stalled,
diminished, disappeared...
And so now the helpless come here,
and become one with the hopeless,
and the hopeless come to die.'
So spoke the young vibrant
priest, Diego Sirocco,
and his six companions, all lay,
all professional, all rich,
nodded gravely. Except one.
'Fr. Sirocco, you make my mission
so much easier for me to fulfill
by your woeful tale.' Diego was startled.
'So you are the latest emissary
from my family, urging me
to abandon the helpless
descending into the hopeless.'
The young man only smiled,
a Luciferan smile, a smile
without joy. 'Exactly, Fr. Sirocco.
I want you to sin against your calling.'
The other men recognized this
as a moment of decision, and
quietly withdrew into the milling crowd.
Alone now, Diego said loftily,
'Sir, do you know the cost of despair?
Do you know the value of hope? Do you
include faith in your calculations, or
only profit, like my family? '
The young man pretended to calculate sums
with his fingers, then smiled his Luciferan
smile. 'No, father, but they might.'
He pointed to four burly men
who lumbered into their circle. Without a word,
one of them smashed Diego's face
with his fist. Two others dragged
his limp body to a waiting car,
and dumped him in the back seat.
The burly man with the fist nodded
to the young man, got into the car,
which sped away. People nearby,
the witnesses, bowed their heads
and walked away quickly. The young man
stood, with his arms akimbo, smiling
his Luciferen smile, as the crowd
thinned and disappeared, as overhead
the sun bent toward darkness.

The Flight of Gulls

Early morning I hear
the gulls as they circle
above the stationary ships
I can only dimly make out
through the tumbling fog.
Their cries are little knives
that make sharp incisions.
To try to sleep again is useless.

Early afternoon I walk down
the cold autumn streets
deserted except for exhausted
workers trudging by, sullen and
unresponsive. The gulls seem to be
flying in slow motion, as if they are
memorizing our lives below them.
One of the workers curses them.

Early evening I sit
in a bar with three friends,
a fifth friend recently deceased
haunts us. A nearly empty whiskey
bottle stands on shreds of poems,
next to five glasses. It's like
waiting in a doctor's office,
knowing the news will be bad.

But we still wait to hear it.
That expectant waiting - that's life
as we know it in Port Trakl.
Nothing is really alive with
reality, it's only nostalgia
and desire. And far above us
the gulls keep circling.
Don't they ever tire of trying?

Monday, September 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,drunkenness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 28 September 2015

Expertly written but further reading is needed before I can make an intelligent comment. I like having to search myself for my own interpretations, rather than being handed, or force fed one.

1 0 Reply
Paul Sebastian 28 September 2015

As to your first poem, the priest representing the good deeds he was doing and the burly strong armed man presented himself in disguise, the Evil One. People came to Fr. Sirocco for healing. It was by sight and not by faith they sought help. When Fr. Sirocco left, they left their faith too. This is how I saw it as I read your poem. It was thought provoking. Thank you. You second poem, Flight of Gulls, man seems to indulge himself in this mundane life, whereas the birds, like fly freely with no life cares, taking life easy and making a shout about their lives. Beautiful contrast. Very reflective.Thank you. .

1 0 Reply
Daniel Brick 30 September 2015

Thanks for your wonderful comments, Paul. You illuminate my poems with your words and return them rnhanced by your wisdom. Thank you for your faith in my poems.

0 0
Pamela Sinicrope 28 September 2015

Wohooooo! And so the story begins again...

1 0 Reply
Souren Mondal 28 September 2015

Nothing is really alive with reality, it's only nostalgia and desire. And far above us the gulls keep circling. Don't they ever tire of trying? I would be frank, I could barely make out the meaning of your poem even after reading it for five times in a row.. But these ending lines really left an impression upon me.. The nostalgia of an once meaningful past and the pain of living a life, in present, that has lost it's meaning has a real charm to it. Although, I guess you, or many others may disagree with me using the word 'charm' here, but I could find none else.. The two parts of the poem, the first in which the priest is abducted, and the second part about a man's daily life, repetitive and absurd, with a strange consciousness of mortality and meaninglessness of life, is really haunting.. Reading this poem, indeed, made me shiver and feel how we, as human beings, are so often not conscious about our own beings that have an existence, but not necessarily a meaning.. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem sir.. I would love to come back at this poem, maybe when my mind would be more ripe, and more capable of comprehending it better. Until then, I would live in the reverie of this one, the world of Port Trakl, is indeed a one that everyone would want to visit, but then not visit at the same time..

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success