People Poem by Jaelyn Fields

People



you know i been holding on
people are trying to make me weak
but i still stay strong
they always look at me like im doing somthin wrong

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 08 June 2008

The best part for me, in readung these poems is looking at the different ways people have of saying the same thing. Poetry, is a way and means of saying a lot in a few words. I dare say, most writers don't consider that aspect most of the time. I count myself as a sometimes offender in that regard. That's why, when I find someone who understands that about poetry. I feel good about its future. Normally, I lament it. GW62

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