(17/09/1987)

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Pen, Paper, Inspiration

Pen, Paper, Inspiration
To ensure that poems flow
Only inspiration will do
Pen and paper, thats for you.

For my mind has the power
to retain the words,
words that'll be appreciated today
forgotten tomorrow
my words today,
tomorrow they'll be

dead
buried
begging for attention....

will they continue begging? !

pen, paper inspiration
i just need inspiration
you can keep the pen and the paper
to write to me notes of your opinion-

on my words
my thoughts
my soul

Inspiration (full stop)
I need no more....

Submitted: Monday, September 18, 2006
Edited: Thursday, September 16, 2010

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  • Nikunj Parikh (4/16/2007 6:11:00 AM)

    all u need to write is inspiration.......
    excellent imagination.....
    niks

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  • Mahfooz Ali (11/12/2006 6:08:00 AM)

    Nicely weaved and outstanding piece of imagination.

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  • Brian Dorn (10/5/2006 6:05:00 PM)

    Even the idea of inspiration can provide inspiration... thoughtful poem, Preeti!
    Brian

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  • Kelly Allen Vinal (9/18/2006 6:10:00 AM)

    Yet another outstanding piece from an outstanding young poet.

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  • Abhay Mishra (9/18/2006 5:49:00 AM)

    Well, Preeti You are too good at these keep posting more

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  • Nalini Hebbar (9/18/2006 2:04:00 AM)

    preets...your words flow so freely...WOW...you were never short of inspiration! ! ! ...let me proudly say 'i told you so' dear little friend...lol...love...nalini

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/18/2006 2:00:00 AM)

    pREETI...This piece has pristine flow...jumping clenly from line to line, so smoothly...hmmmmm, the inspiration for this POEM...I wonder, could this have been, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , naaah! i'll hive ya' this one, young lady....Nice Right!
    ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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  • Chandan Roy (9/18/2006 12:45:00 AM)

    Preets....... This one....? ! ? ! ? !
    It is looking great.... a smooth read...... I love the mind that drew this picture.

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  • William Jackson (9/18/2006 12:39:00 AM)

    Clearly the muses are at work here. Nice write!

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  • Sridhar RVL (9/18/2006 12:27:00 AM)

    A 10 from me.

    This is it. Inspiration. I am glad You pointed it out. Thanks.

    Nice Poem. I will remember for quite some time to come.

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