Pavement Weeds - Haiku Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Pavement Weeds - Haiku

Rating: 5.0

It rained heavily
Cement pavement of roads cracked
Weeds built their houses


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 08 December 2023

Meaningful and excellent....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 December 2023

Wonderful Rose-Marie Thanks for sharing

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Wonderfully realistic. It's all a chain of incidence. The road, the pavement, the crack and finally the weeds.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 December 2023

Wonderfully thought and worded. Something cracks and breaks and many others rise and emerge.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 December 2023

The way of nature, expressed through a fantastic haiku. Dearest Rose, you deserve the best. To my favourite too.

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Rebecca Navarre 31 December 2023

Despite most people not liking the weeds. This brings an amazing feeling of spring to me! .. Endless Stars and 10'S! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 31 December 2023

Beautifully presented, of nature and it's growth! ..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2023

THREE: To my FAVOURITES this Beautiful painting.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2023

TWO: yellow-brown carpet over the broken parts of the street, a very beautiful painting to behold Haiku very beautifully depicted. TOP Marks!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 December 2023

ONE: the streets are damaged by a heavy rain shower, and weeds spring up, green-yellow color on the pavement, shows a very beautiful scene,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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