Passion Precession Poem by saadat tahir

Passion Precession

Rating: 3.2


Love’s fade,
insipid glade.

labored heave,
flaccid peeve.

Wax precess.
Wane recess.

Dried sheaves.
Scattered leaves.

Stark glance,
looks askance.

Nebulous eyes.
Hidding lies,

Timeless tales.
Careworn wails.

(Islamabad)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 26 August 2009

very perceptive, Saadat. good observations Mamta

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Vaibhav Pandey 26 August 2009

very effecient writing sir......insightful...10

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Kesav Easwaran 26 August 2009

good 'passion precession' words parade...gives a nice tasty insight...thanks...10

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Rakesh Bedi 26 August 2009

...... Few words/ great meanings.......

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Indira Babbellapati 28 August 2009

i already told you that you have a mastery over couplets...

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Rafique Farooqi 08 September 2009

sweet & smart poem, love keeps its momentums, and powers

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Ency Bearis 04 September 2009

coll couplets....short but meaningful....10

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Ejaz Khan 04 September 2009

To convey a message in rhyming is indeed difficult but you seem to master the art, very descriptive and creative write, Saadat!

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Anjali Sinha 03 September 2009

lovely couplets each a masterpiece as always a tenner for you anjali

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 August 2009

Wonderful rhythmic poem, short and terse like. Conical spin of a long cry exhausted in timeless tales of love and pain. Good couplets, Saadat. Regards Naseer

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