Pain Poem by jennifer mcguire

Pain

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My mind is aching I'm lost and alone, I'm lost in a world of transit with this cross I bare, tonight I contemplated suicide it's no act of selfishness when you've got freedom to live you've should have freedom to die and that is I, selfishness is the person who turns a blind eye and beckons you to carry on when the world is enough to make me die, I contemplated suicide tonight because I'm lost and lonely in this life

Monday, October 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: painful,hurt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Mayo 27 October 2015

I think you're a good writer, The hurt and desperation you're feeling comes across very clearly and powerfully in this. I wish I had magic words that could illuminate all the wonderful choices you'll have in the future- -and all of the joy that you'll bring to this world if only you don't give-up. Things change, Jennifer- -don't stop hoping, don't stop trying.

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Edmund Strolis 26 October 2015

A poem for you............. Each poem added each moment of every day. Here before your eyes they gather quietly. A drop added by you, a drop added by me. They are not gone like a waterfall. They swirl and flow sea to heart to sea, The sea needs you to help her to be. A place you can rest and drink peacefully. A welcome smile is free in the poet society. The silver lining always lies in our humanity.

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Simone Inez Harriman 26 October 2015

Jennifer, I am hoping this is simply a creative poem of despair and not a reality for you. I f you are in this dark space I hope you are able to reach out to those who are willing to help as Pamela Sinicrope has suggested in her comment. You have such a talent. I read your first poem and was very impressed. You have magic in your pen. I hope you will keep writing. Love and hugs Simone

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