Pain Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Pain

Rating: 5.0

Pain

So painful,
you don't feel that
and much more
that pain remains stubbornly here

all other sensations
politely keep their mouths shut
but this one
so painful and direct

Saturday March 16,2024

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2024

Liked the first two lines of the ultimate stanza giving emphasis to the pain felt. Top Marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2024

So deeply poignant and touching and I can feel the pain that is vividly depicted in this well expressed poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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