Page 3 Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Page 3

Rating: 5.0


Lust busy; lechery engaged too
On floor of glamour, clamour stiletto
Modesty roams free; under marquee
Long live page 3

Necklines plunge, Hemlines soar
Botoxed faces smile evermore
Sozzled spirits revel in revrie
Long live page 3

The diamond ring caught infection
It changed fingers too often
Pendant enjoys though; premier mid riff show
Ogles toggle; free
Long live page 3

Values valued at the lowest
Treachery held in esteem highest
Honesty waits for its turn
Gets only heartburn
hard on rocks, life on a spinning spree
Long live the page 3.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 03 September 2009

Page 3 has much truth of the, plastic, fantastic, people of image world today.

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Raj Nandy 03 September 2009

I HAVE JUST GIVEN MY COMMENTS ON OLFA PHILOSOPHY'S POEM WHICH RAISED THE QUESTION OF ROMANTIC LOVE IN OUR MODERN CONTEXT! JUST READ IT FOR KICKS! HERE TOO, I MUST SAY THINGS ARE NOT VERY DIFFERENT! WE ALL READ PAGE -3 BECAUSE IT CATERS TO OUR LOVE FOR SENSATIONAL HAPPENINGS, IN AN ERA OF ONE NIGHT STAND AND LIVE-IN RELATIONSHIPS! THANKS FOR SHARING! 10! -RAJ

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Mubeen Sadhika 03 September 2009

You have expressed ideas clearly. Words are new.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 September 2009

the newsprint has to sell...for that the reders have to get stuck..and that really stickc

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This is all new to me and hope it doesn't travel to Australia. You paint a picture of soulless people with lechery, free modesty, and botox people. Sozzled is a great work and it means drunk according to the dictionary! The infection of the diamond ring is such creative imagery. Loved it! 10 love Karin

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Anjali Sinha 17 September 2009

Necklines plunge, Helmlines soar Botoxed faces smile evermore Sozzled spirits revel in revrie Long live page 3 yeyyyyyyyyy long live PAGE 3 one goes upwards the other downwards where do they meet? ? ? do you have an answer? whatever, a good satire A+++ anjali

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Rachel Butler 16 September 2009

Necklines plunge, Helmlines soar Rachel Ann Butler

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

an ogling poetic satire written fabulously.........10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 12 September 2009

a stire on the page 3....very well done

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Deborah Cromer 12 September 2009

You have written out strong points in this. Your imagination mixed together with reality has created a powerful poem. There is a line of darkness that runs through this in places. Well done and nice work! Once again you create a talented piece. DC

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