i wish i could swim the pacific ocean and back.
and when i came back to sit in front of a burning burning fire
until it dried me to the bone.
and for my skeleton to be hung above your bed
to act as a catcher of your night terrors
and it would work
because you would know that i was magical.
because i swam the whole pacific ocean and back.
for you.
Your format variety is something that intrigues me as many, many poets don't know how to accomplish that, when in fact it is this easy... you have a way with words, and I like the images you paint in my mind. Very artistic. Very poetic. You've earned a fan.
I love the symbolic power of love that you created through the ocean. well thought of.
crazy about a guy who doesn't give a s**t.......duh. insanity at its best....wht more can i say
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Not like a fast dip in the pool