Our Poem Poem by Kathrin Peters

Our Poem

Rating: 3.5


I wrote that I would run away
far far away
I can't find my way
My world is always grey

My world changed to black
but you wrote back
'If we didn't live so far away
you could find your way
I advise you to run to me.'
This is where I would be.

If I ran to you
I'd need new shoes
I would run more than 350 kilometers
but after that I'd feel better
I could use the train
because you don't drain

This poem is written by me
I ask you what would be
if you ran to me.

This poem is written by you
you said 'I would run to you
just to know you.'

This poem is written by us
I can't take a bus
the way is to long
but we stayed strong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 26 September 2012

I would run more than 350 kilometers---richtig Deutsche Frau Damen I appreciate this energy in you.When you are tired i would come to see how it looks when somebody sweats your way-a spanking write

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Asif Andalib 16 September 2012

Separate lives. Nice write. Thanks for sharing

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Eindaray Kyaw 08 September 2012

How wonderful this is.....so great I like it!

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Abdallah Gamal 07 September 2012

Well, that's really so emotional, colours of passion, sacrifice, and faithfulness are too pretty :) 10+

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Kathrin P. 07 September 2012

this is my favorite poem i love it so much

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