Our Night On The Beach Poem by Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Our Night On The Beach

Rating: 2.7


Waves crashing on the beach
Sand in my toes
Sun setting
Trees swaying
Throwing rounds rocks in the water
Lying in each others arms
Birds on a log
Crabs crawling along the waters edge
Our footprints through the sand
Scattered like the stars in the sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deva De Silva 23 June 2009

This is amazingly descriptive... I saw you... I saw the crabs... the bird (what kind though?) and felt the moment of pure contentment! Beautiful Shelby... just the kind of writing I love to read. It merges your experience with the readers...

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