Opening The Can Poem by Susan Lacovara

Opening The Can



With a single twist
Your can opener words
Crave into my tin
A jagged edge
Ripped wide
All the contents of my heart
Dumped into a dish
Of both dangerous despair
And decadent remembrance
To be gobbled and swallowed
And choked upon
As I, famished,
Hobble back to the table
Of you
The absence of your love
Leaving me in anorexic ignorance
That others might provide nourishment
Yet the small portions
Of what we once dined upon, ours,
Enough to keep me from wasting away

Wednesday, September 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: missing you
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(09/16/15) Small nibbling, a tapas treat for a hindsighted heart. M. And always mmmmmmm.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2015

Please read lines instead of lies.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2015

Marvellous expression. A stunning poem that touches the heart. The favourite lies are ........ All the contents of my heart Dumped into a dish Of both dangerous despair And decadent remembrance To be gobbled and swallowed And choked upon As I, famished, Hobble back to the table.....Thanks for sharing......10

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