Only You Redeem Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Only You Redeem

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You accept our regards greatest father,
We are missing you very much in Earth,
You know we are remembering you,
We know you are searching for us,
Your unbroken love invites us daily,
We hail you, oh dear greatest power.

Only you redeem that we know of course,
No one is there apart from you for us,
We surrender without any condition,
With selfless love you accept us,
You give us chance to live peacefully,
Dear ocean of peace, you redeem us.

You redeem us from hell and teach,
You come and take us with you,
We are eager to meet you in eternity,
Oh dear, eternal father you behold us,
You take us towards heaven by mercy,
You give us golden chance of nectar.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,19 August 2018. All rights reserved.

Saturday, August 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,philosophical ,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 18 August 2018

What a perfectly beautiful poem! I loved this one very much. Thank you, Kumarmani!

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Gajanan Mishra 19 August 2018

we all in eternity, great write

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 September 2019

We are remembering you! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 21 August 2018

'You redeem us'! This is the only prayer rising from our hearts, especially of the people of Kerala, as our land is passing through a devastating flood! Each time we realize how powerless we are without God's sheltering presence! A beautiful poem affirming God's supremacy over everything!

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 August 2018

Redeem us Yes Only You can redeem us

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 August 2018

Kumarmani, such an uplifting poem...10+++

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Aqua Flower 19 August 2018

Well said about our heavenly father. I like the line we surrender without any conditionand another line you take us towards heaven by Mercy.... This is a beautiful poem in prayer.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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