Only One, But A Lion Poem by aung si myanmar

Only One, But A Lion

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No persons create
The poison within snake.

No friend is the mother
Of the scent within flower.

Which hooligan proved that
Only rich men could have success?

For the kind of phoenix's soul,
The nature wild won't ignore
The future mild to own rainbow.

Never lazy though lonely one!
Ever ready under the sun!
Better steady to run after run! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter Daniel Phiri 23 August 2012

I think you managed to create harmony in your words and a steady flow in your poem, yet with a powerful message..nice

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Philo Yan 21 August 2012

I think that this poem has depth and a moral message.

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Eindaray Kyaw 20 August 2012

I loved it! Which hooligan proved that Only rich men could have success? This poem is packed with courage and also makes me feel brave and reminds me not to be depressed. I really appreciate your sense of creating poems!

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