Only * Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Only *

Rating: 4.9


The butterfly gave me the wings.
Ah, as it was cheerful to me on clouds
Has disarranged my hair winds...
The winter frightens to me only, know,
Soon, White wings covers with snow...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Johnson 09 October 2008

Eloquently written, Tsira.I could see through the eyes of those who it was about.A found pleasure for today.

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Lynda Robson 09 October 2008

Nice poem Tsira, winter is indeed on its way, 10 Lynda xx

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 October 2008

childhood, youth and maturity...beautiful 10

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Gregory Collins 11 October 2008

i think, and this is silly me, that with one wing of the butterfly, and your one lovely wing, you both create a pair of angel wings, now just reach out and step away... :)

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Kesav Easwaran 11 October 2008

the butterfly the wind and the winter...good imageries on the passing shows of age in life...a well thought out write 10

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Andrew Blakemore 26 November 2008

Such beautiful imagery Tsira, lovely poem. Best wishes, Andrew

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James Roberts 26 November 2008

Who knows what can result from the beat of a butterflies wings of indeed from the butterfly itself. Do you illustrate your poetry best wishes jim

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John Tiong Chunghoo 25 October 2008

there is something very cheerful here. there is a life, good efforts tsira. thanks for coming to my side of the site. tks.

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Mark Nwagwu 15 October 2008

with wings you fly and the air will sweep the cover of snow - a deep poem, lovely

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Marvin Brato 13 October 2008

With wings we fly to our to our destiny with freedom! Nice poem.

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