One Who Believes Poem by Mamta Agarwal

One Who Believes



One who believes
In Him
Is like a tree
Planted
By a stream,
Who gets replenished
When he
Runs out of steam.


An atheist
Is like a bush,
Growing
In a desert.
He believes
In himself
And chooses
To walk alone


But takes
The risk
Of withering,
As there is no oasis
From which
He can draw
Sustenance.
Thus ends up
Feeling forlorn.

if you get
into a patnership
with Him
you'll sail through
hardships with ease

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 23 July 2008

Yes Madam, your last para speaks of an enduring truth! Kindly read today's TOI PAGE NO.20, - 'A PICTURE IN MY WALLET AFTER ALL THOSE YEARS '- which brings out your thoughts in the form of a story! -Raj Nandy,24Jul 08

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Rema Prasanna 19 July 2008

I believe Lord's splendor.. I believe he can lift me from anguish... I dont know how an atheist feels.. I believe in one more faith do good if you can dont' cause harm to others.. I like this write..it flows like a soft wind flows... flows.. to reach a definite destination.10+ Rema

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Catrina Heart 19 July 2008

Faith in HIM makes us blessed...never will be lost in the path of life for He lights our journey and gives us a helping hand.....reflecting! ! ! ! ! ! ! great poem.

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