One Fine Spring Eve Poem by Archita Kumar

contd. But if allowed a little time that attachment diminishes, and one may view a poem without the heart interfering too much. This is the time to chisel it. This is my experience. I would love to have your and others' comments. Let me add, I liked what I read.

Full of rich imagery and passionate feelings rushing from heart create a poem in its raw form. I don't want to use the word tinkering, but a poem adds to its beauty if chiseled discreetly. Soon as a poem is born the poet may find it perfect. A poet is like a mother who finds her child perfect. ...contd..

Time paused! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Beautiful imagery written throughout the poem. An excellent piece, thank you for sharing.