Once Upon A Time, I Was...Not Now Poem by Unwritten Soul
Once Upon A Time, I Was...Not Now
I was innocent, maybe now I don't
because when they've killed me, I still survive
because when they deny my past, I still run for future
But ironically, you're my denied past
My heart, tougher than diamond
but price as cheap as blood
because without it I m not alive
because without it I lost my breath
This heart,
My heart, tougher than diamond
but with the price of blood you paid
Your words stab and by your act, I suffered
That's how you stole my breaths, for years
My heart, tougher than diamond
But effortlessly you broke it
for each time it cracked, I healed it
and each time it healed, in tears
Till it flows and washed away names
Ironically, now you are my denied past
I was innocent, maybe now I am not
I was surrendering to the unknown path,
Believing as if that past is a shadow that never exists
As I've been fooled bright future is not in front
I can be who whatever you said
but I chose to bleed instead
so if really my life is yours
you won't survive
so if this heart is mine
I'll be free, I'll try to revive
My heart, tougher than diamond
But effortlessly you broke it
My heart not made of diamond
There is my whole soul inside
When you hold my heart to break it
Then you won't find me inside it
Because of my soul for you
Will be forever unwritten
Forever unwritten
Someone beyond what you can see
The one, true me
after a period of time you have post such poem here. as you suggest others how to live the beauty of life, you already live such life. poetic images are very nice in the poem such as Then you wont find me inside it Because my soul for you Will be forever unwritten Forever unwritten Someone beyond what you can see The one, true me ..... best wishes for future and every present moment dear friend
when they've killed me, i still survive because when they deny my past, i still run for future- - - - - - - - - - I have never seen so much expressed in so few words. You inspire both a heart's response to these words but also a soul's response and a mind's reasoning response to this destructive bent in society and in certain unpleasant individuals. We should all tae these words for our motto, our mantra, our prayer! Exceedingly well done, Soul. 10 +++++++++++++
Thank You for your Poet Notes giving us a further insight into Once Upon A Time, I Was... Not Now Incredible heartfelt words Soul. Past may be past but there is some that we cannot just leave behind.
'My heart, tougher than diamond But effortlessly you broke it' - effortlessly you have described how it felt! 'friends like all of you are the best thing to have while surviving a lifetime test' - so nicely said! Liked your reply to Muhammad Ali's comment.
I am a supporter of self respect, of course not being selfish, this poem teaches loads of self respect. thank you for sharing.
Thank you dear Mr. Hassan...yes sure self respect is not selfish, indeed it is our responsibility to keep our live better...I cant say much wise words but sure i love to share what i have thoughts in my mind, merci again.
Let me revisit this lovely poem once more. Through self discovery we feel tender heart, love an expression. Heart shines like diamond in innocence. We think about future. God's grace remains behind us. This is definitely very interesting poem shared here..10
Thank you so much dear, :) Have a great diwali festival there with all your beloved ones tomorrow!
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Un. Soul..Keep on writing.
Thank you for your encouraging support, you too Sy wong :)