On The Way To Work Poem by Nomad Omnia

On The Way To Work

Rating: 2.9


You saw me cross the road
Behind you. And though
You never looked back
You dallied,
Fished in your bag
To slow your gait.
I caught you
As we came
To where our paths must part.
We were together
Just long enough
To pass the word
From eye to eye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Thewless 30 November 2009

This one, I like. - Not only simple, but visual and uncluttered.

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Sonya Florentino 28 November 2009

intriguing....what a glance conveys......

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