On Loving Me Poem by Alice Cuenca

On Loving Me

Rating: 5.0


as i go deeper into the ocean
to find my lost self
i found you...
day by day the wall collapses,
frontiers extend
my soul is weakening...
my self is thinning as
i climb the hills to merge with gods
oh! this bliss; a glimpse of perfection
have i found you?
have i found myself?
i should dig deeper below the ocean floor
to find myself...to lose myself...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvin Banggollay 28 April 2008

wHAT A WONDERFUL POEM OF TRYING TO DISCOVER YOURSELF. nICE WRITE SISTER, MELVIN

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Ying Escalona 29 April 2008

please dont submerged, keep afloat...and you will not only feel the touch...but the embrace...

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em blue 12 May 2008

I feel you.. thanks.

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intuitive and profound..brilliant work 10+++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 September 2008

...to know self is the main task........fine composition indeed.......10+

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Cheneth Jane San Diego 30 June 2008

to find myself...to lose myself... i love this line the most.... it describe me a lot...

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 14 June 2008

A platonic love story beautifully told in poetry

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Janua Catt Alonzo 07 June 2008

lost and be found - i think finding ourselves is our greatest delight after losing it...embrace yourself tight-never misplace it nor allow it to shatter...

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