Nexus To Artistry Poem by Alice Cuenca

Nexus To Artistry

Rating: 5.0


Amidst the noise, i hear you!
i retraced my steps...
beguiled but still
grateful for the unsought
words tattered by storm
that turned into dust...
a stilled-heart
captured by poetry
acclimatized, confined
within...
the limits of artistry,
the illusory of the myth
but beyond a jailed-thought,
is compassion
not overridden by the
irrationality
of the flesh
my winged-spirit
fluttering...
to the immeasurable
limitless...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 May 2008

your true artistry has prevails. your touch of words is very fine. good job pal.

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Sandra Fowler 16 May 2008

May your winged spirit continue to soar! Lovely write. Warmesr regards, Sandra

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Fahim Sayed 17 May 2008

Nice words friend..... I had to read it twice to understand the feeling in it.

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bjanka im 19 May 2008

...I like this one....one of my favorites....flying so gracefull with it s subtile lines as a little bird enjoying her freedom...thanks...

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Francesca Martin 19 May 2008

Thank you for the invitation :) This is wonderful.. definitely has a great feel. Your word choice is careful and precise, I like it a lot!

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Onelia Avelar 19 June 2008

I like the fresh air of abstraction of your poem. It is very well penned and pleasant reading.

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Saint Cynosure 04 June 2008

your work is AWESOME

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Coach Roth 30 May 2008

It is the goal of the artist to 'penetrate' the energy of the universe, either simply or more complex...this poem flies...nice imagery and wording...Coach

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Sadiqullah Khan 30 May 2008

profound and very rich, , the nexus no doubt leads to poetic artistry, ,

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David Desantis 28 May 2008

Wow Candice, i've never read your stuff before. I disagree with greenwolfe's comments...poetry is not always about what is right in front of you, its about delving deep to find something. Other times it can even just be about the way words flow together or sound and mean nothing at all. I think its up to every writer to decide what they want to write about, and the main point should be to illicit feeling. This did from me. I thought it was excellent! 10/10

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