(#) On Free Love Poem by Alice Cuenca

(#) On Free Love

Rating: 5.0


...'on both ends
of a stretchable string-
nothing is tied'


gaze transposing. Passion,
in complete abandonment
precariously spreads. But
thinly to every flower.
he, looking back the narrowing
strip of the highway.

an imperfect life. Molding
back to a mother's womb,
laid perfectly for a fetus.

metamorphosed. But
snapped back
to its original form.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ric Bastasa 06 February 2009

another masterpiece for candice...

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Akram Awadat 08 February 2009

very nice poem, well done thanks a lot 10

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Ying Escalona 08 February 2009

'on both ends of a stretchable string- nothing is tied' and so the tension is zero....its must have been lying in the ground...dead..waiting to rot..anyway..free love...sometimes we stumble on it.....

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 26 April 2009

this is truly a work of art my friend..spectacular

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premji premji 13 February 2009

hi candice candid feelings............................ love is that sweet uneasiness which will never leave you............ so just dissolve......................

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 February 2009

Basically, love supposed to be free...............free from manipulation and all.Good job Kandis.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 09 February 2009

interesting work, well done, thanks for sharing

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 February 2009

...'on both ends of a stretchable string- nothing is tied' ............................I think on both ends life is tied.The remaining poem is very fine specially choice of words.10

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