Okay So Poem by Andrea Bencardino

you've really got to stop
using that word LOVE
you've said to many things
you never meant
you've hurt me enough
but i cant seem to take my leave.
Addicted to an unnecesary drug
& slowly burns in my veins
Slowly burning me to ashes.
im permanently marked.
I love you,
Im not sure wat i feel for you
but its pointless letting you know
you have no measure of knowin
the pain
the joy
the lifes left behind...

but go on my love
keep on playing games
Keep on pushin & pushing
Harder, farther & faster
Im addicted to the pain
Im addicted to the drug.

Im dying slowly & painfully,
& its not because of this addiction.
even though your drug isnt killing me
Im already left for dead.

This sickness
its been months
Im scared
Im in pain
my time heres short
I know it,

but for once, If im meant to go Iwill without a fight

i want to thank you my drug
without you i wouldnt of known wat love is...


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