Ok Poem by Dave Birss

Ok

Rating: 5.0


Every time we passed
They laughed
It may seem paranoid
And daft
But I was sure they
Laughed at me
Who shuffled by
Self-consciously
And after we had
Shuffled by
I checked my shirt
I checked my fly
I checked for spinach
In my teeth
I checked for glimpses
Of my briefs
And toilet paper
On my shoe
And blobs of ugly
Nasal goo
But they didn’t laugh at me
They say
They laughed at you
So that’s OK.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 27 February 2006

Holy crap, I thought this was so funny! Terrific! 10, definitely -chuck

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Dave Birss

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