Oceans Poem by anais vionet

Oceans

Rating: 5.0


My boyfriend (Peter) and I went down to New Haven Harbor today.

Let's face it, we're surrounded by oceans,
and most of them are downright inhospitable.

I live near the ocean, (pointing) it's right over there.
I love the ocean, tripping over whenever I've time to spare.

The way I'm fawning over it, you'd think I know it well.
But I really only love its edges and undulating swells.

It's like a book that I've judged by its cover,
a beautiful stranger taken as a lover,
or a pie when I've only tasted the crust.
I love something, I suppose, I've barely even touched.

Peter says that black, inky 'outer-space' is a low-viscosity liquid - another, even vaster ocean that's more dangerous and rarely visited.

The air that we breathe is an ocean - our own, vast, atmosphere - in it swim creatures too small to see, but to the naked eye it looks clear. It flows, eddies and swells - birds swoop in it so you can tell.

Of course, the ocean has issues - it's hardly news - corrosion, erosion, sharks and drowning - and the way the ocean lets the moon and air push it around.

What I love most is its motion, and how it reflects the sun and the moon.

Did I mention that hanging out by the ocean makes for a pleasant afternoon?

Oceans
Wednesday, March 22, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: air,books,ocean,space
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice, power-packed poem. Top score, dear poet

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3) and again, " What I love most is its motion, and how it reflects the sun and the moon." the wavy motion on the surface and strong currents in the deep like the Gulf Stream… resulting in the monsoons rains all over the Indian sub continent….

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2) " the ocean has issues …..the way the ocean lets the moon and air push it around." loved it.

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Very beautifully written. Captured my heart as a first-hand experience. As my own experience. A lot of observations, facts, science, and sublime poetry.

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