Ocean Movements Poem by Carolyn Marie Taylor

Ocean Movements

Rating: 5.0


Your voice is like gentle whispers of the wind
Gently blowing in my ears.
The sun of your smile kisses my skin
And melts all within me.

The waves wrapping around me with warm arms
Gently smoothing the rough edges.
With fingers that caress my body
And feel the inner soul.

My open mind of ocean waves
Opens my heart to see inside.
The gentleness of heart and mind
Washing away all troubled thoughts.

(1-18-2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 20 April 2009

A really beautiful poem Ms. Taylor with great admiration for the adored one using some eloquent simlis. The imagery you have drawn has really got the attraction in it to grab reader's attention and one can actually learn from it the art of praising the loved ones in poetic manner..........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Ana Zaldivar 28 January 2009

this is written with the heart.. as stella said, calm and lovely. thank you for sharing this unique piece

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